Ok, I agree. Mostly, ideas come out of no-where and wonât stop bothering us, unless we entertain them, or at least, listen to one of them. But for me, in most cases, when I am writing poetry, the first thing I do is to figure out in which poetic form I can easily express myself, and rhyming
âMixed Rhymeâ poetry is really easy to write, you must only have the patience—
counting syllables. The willingness to do the âcountingâ is the best help to learn writing poetry in a mixed rhyme. Indeed, my own success in writing my poetry in this form has come from possessing the patience of a saint. Yes, it cost me nothing, Iâm just a very patient person in all I do, same for my writing. Hey, why donât you try it yourself!
By the way, I wonât wish you âgood luckâ writing in this form, âcos we, being a
writer, all know that thereâs no luck needed in writing poetry, but only our own willingness to do/ to write is involved. Of course, I do wish you try and have fun writing your own âmixed rhymeâ. And, if you seriously want to learn the secret
how to write a âMixed Rhymeâ, the best thing you have to do right now is to start writing one.
Here are some samples of a âMixed Rhymeâ I wrote:
The Poet, Who Asked the Birds How To Fly (Mixed Rhyme)
O, behold the man, by the old sea
He closes his brown eyes, feeling free
Dancing to the wind, taunting the bee
He, who loves nature, although, carefree
Nevertheless, wants you all to see
Him, who hates watching gray clouds hide the bright sky
Where falcons, soaring high, relentlessly
Against the gusting wind, theyâve freedom to fly
Reveling in fleeting days, across the
Virulent sea, where he spends time
Lulling, unmindful of them
The naked ladies of Shem
On shoreline rocks, weaving blue rhyme
For he does not like to see those eyes, tinted
With hues of withered red roses on the ground
âCos there is no more beauty, in them, when dead
Or, in the eyes, when full of sadness, the sound
Of a unkempt sea, where its breath
Streaking his soul, without regret
Filled with un-prophetic news
That he, too, wished to fly, to set
Wings to where he wonât have to fret
âBout not wanting to peruseâ¦
The whippersnapper, who nâer wanted to cry
He, the poet, who asked the birds how to fly
He, the man, by the old sea, hurt by heartâs lie
That, in forms, caused him to unveil
Whence readers can feel, the detail
Whether, penned in a single verse
Or, in a freestyle, like free-verse
Whether, itâs written in sonnet
Or, perhaps, in a rhymed couplet
Between lines, untangle his thought
And youâll see me, the life, I fought
***
Secret Of A Mango Tree (Mixed Rhyme)
I use time not on shorelines, watching
The great yellow orbâ¦..never rushing
To fade and restâ¦..before the laughing
Eyes of lovers, as noon wind touching
Them, beneath the coco palms, kissing
But I, like bird on a mango tree nestle
Clinging, childishly, on its sturdy branch
Before my eyes, I see how crickets whistle
With rhythmic tune, as tares foolishly dance
With the gadfly, that flatters free
As I spend the stolen time
Enjoying the natureâs rhyme
Till the tree bears fruitsâ¦..just for me
Its fruits, sweet and golden, the tree itself is
No match against the brutal force of nature
Onceâ¦twice, standing helpless, while bearded mantis
Forcefully stabbing-in its sting, that rapture
The innocent soul, that still bleeds
In silence, the mango tree heeds
The wailing beats of its heart
Hapless, lying on the dead ground
While hungry beast started to pound
Feastedâ¦.till wholeâs torn apart
Scared; it soars, aimless, over seas of thunder
With no hope, in mind, of gazing the wonder
Of the world, for spirits lies under yonder
Mango tree, a glorious image
Of little robin, now, in rage
No clue, if ever peace will live
In the heart of those, once, deceived
What goodness will it give watchingâ¦
The sun fades sure darkness itâll bring?
Certainly, no one knows, but me
The secret of a mango tree
***
About the Author
Ernesto Pangilinan Santiago is a poet/immigrant living in Athens, Greece.
He is the author of a poetry book âThe Walking Manâ, published by Outskirtspress.com
More info: http://www.outskirtspress.com/ernestopangilinansantiago
He is the author of a poetry book âThe Walking Manâ, published by Outskirtspress.com
More info: http://www.outskirtspress.com/ernestopangilinansantiago
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